The dialogue between the MC and the girls is unnatural. It feels forced and not something that would actually create a connection between them. Unrealistic situations. A teacher who on the first day of meeting an exchange student invites him to her house for foreign language lessons? He get caught spying on a teenage girl on the first day of meeting his live in family and its just water under the bridge? Storytelling is off. Nice character models though.
new fav avn, i love this. also, i love how smooth the animations are, some animations in other avns usually lag on my phone, but not this one. and most avns i've played really just focus on animating the body, but on this one, you even animate the hair. can't wait for the next update.
She will appear, but no new lewd scenes with her yet. I'll probably end up splitting the update to release it sooner, because currently it's projected to be 3-4 times bigger than 0.12
All right guys, this games is still prety early in its development and indepently if you're looking for a sex game simulator, or a history based visual novel you should still wait a bit, as there is not a lot here. That being said the few we already have is not bad, and its worth the playtrough.
The character models are overall good, but the proportions, and posing are a bit off. Most girls arms look to thin and it stands out on some angles. (problems the creator already want to resolve by remaking the prologue and chapter 1 once is finished.) The Facial expression are not bad. Lighting is great, no flaws there. But by far the graphics biggest strengh are the animations, there are fluid, loop well (when they loop), and are not exclusive to the erotic scenes, also being used in important moments for the story.
The protagonist for now seems realy shallow, he hasnt show interest in anything beside sex, and he literaly states that the hole reason the game is happening is because he wants to get layed. There is nothing wrong with a basic protagonist, as long as he serves only as a self insert for the player. But the fact that he had friends and a live before the story started, shows that he isnt just that, and can evolve into something greater. Kayla's route seem to be a little rushed, she goes from hating the mc for spying on her, to kissing him as thanks for helping her, to letting him feel her boobs to boost her low self steam, all in the span of 2 days. The concepts for her history arent bad, but its happening WAY to quickly. The rest of the cast are overall good, or to early to tell.
At face value this game doesnt seem to be trying to be anything more than a sex fantasy for the player, and thats perfectly fine, but there are hints lurking beneath the surface that suggest a bigger story is ready to unfold in the following chapters. For now we wait for the next update, and see what it will bring.
You made some very fair points, especially considering the current state of the game. The story will definitely start to unfold in 0.13, which I’m now expecting to be 3 to 4 times bigger than 0.12.
Kayla's route will 100% be adjusted. Her current progression is the result of some poor early planning. That’s one of the many things that will be fixed.
I genuinely can't wait to release 0.13 and the upcoming rework. I believe it’ll bring the game much closer to realizing its full potential.
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why do all characters stutter for no reason? really confusing
The dialogue between the MC and the girls is unnatural. It feels forced and not something that would actually create a connection between them. Unrealistic situations. A teacher who on the first day of meeting an exchange student invites him to her house for foreign language lessons? He get caught spying on a teenage girl on the first day of meeting his live in family and its just water under the bridge? Storytelling is off. Nice character models though.
The first part of the game will be almost completely changed once Chapter I is complete. There will be a remake to fix the very flawed Prologue.
But it gets much better, especially in the next update :D
don't get me started on the weird stuttering from everyone, I almost thought most of the girls were shy but no it's just some problem with the writing
new fav avn, i love this. also, i love how smooth the animations are, some animations in other avns usually lag on my phone, but not this one. and most avns i've played really just focus on animating the body, but on this one, you even animate the hair. can't wait for the next update.
Please consider hosting this on Itch also as that allows installation in the Itch App for Windows.
Unfortunately itch has a 1 GB size limit
You should look more into that cause I have installed games over 5 GB on the itch app.
You're right, I've just seen the option "Contact us if you need more space"
Is 0.12 gonna be free soon(soon i mean like in terms of 2 months)?
It'll be once 0.13 is released
I wanted to download the Android version, but the download did not start.
I added a Pixeldrain link, this one should always work
For me it still doesn't work :')
Are we going to see new scenes of Riley in 0.13 and when are you going to release it?
She will appear, but no new lewd scenes with her yet. I'll probably end up splitting the update to release it sooner, because currently it's projected to be 3-4 times bigger than 0.12
Review of version 0.11
Story: 5/10 Graphics: 7/10 Characters: 4/10
All right guys, this games is still prety early in its development and indepently if you're looking for a sex game simulator, or a history based visual novel you should still wait a bit, as there is not a lot here. That being said the few we already have is not bad, and its worth the playtrough.
The character models are overall good, but the proportions, and posing are a bit off. Most girls arms look to thin and it stands out on some angles. (problems the creator already want to resolve by remaking the prologue and chapter 1 once is finished.) The Facial expression are not bad. Lighting is great, no flaws there. But by far the graphics biggest strengh are the animations, there are fluid, loop well (when they loop), and are not exclusive to the erotic scenes, also being used in important moments for the story.
The protagonist for now seems realy shallow, he hasnt show interest in anything beside sex, and he literaly states that the hole reason the game is happening is because he wants to get layed. There is nothing wrong with a basic protagonist, as long as he serves only as a self insert for the player. But the fact that he had friends and a live before the story started, shows that he isnt just that, and can evolve into something greater. Kayla's route seem to be a little rushed, she goes from hating the mc for spying on her, to kissing him as thanks for helping her, to letting him feel her boobs to boost her low self steam, all in the span of 2 days. The concepts for her history arent bad, but its happening WAY to quickly. The rest of the cast are overall good, or to early to tell.
At face value this game doesnt seem to be trying to be anything more than a sex fantasy for the player, and thats perfectly fine, but there are hints lurking beneath the surface that suggest a bigger story is ready to unfold in the following chapters. For now we wait for the next update, and see what it will bring.
Sorry for bad english
Thanks for the thoughtful and detailed review!
You made some very fair points, especially considering the current state of the game. The story will definitely start to unfold in 0.13, which I’m now expecting to be 3 to 4 times bigger than 0.12.
Kayla's route will 100% be adjusted. Her current progression is the result of some poor early planning. That’s one of the many things that will be fixed.
I genuinely can't wait to release 0.13 and the upcoming rework. I believe it’ll bring the game much closer to realizing its full potential.
Hello! Do you know if it's compatible with Joiplay?